Jeonju International Film Festival
학생이 쓴 원문
Jeonju International Film Festival is going to be held for a week from today. There is a big opening ceremony in the Chonbuk University Cultural Auditorium that I used to spend free time when I was a University student. Famous actors and directors would be there, and people visit my city to watch independent movies looking forward to gourmet food. The ironic thing for me is that I have never joined the festival. I mean that I have not watched the movies showed during the festival. I tried to buy the ticket for coupled of times, but that was quickly sold out online. I can buy some ticket on the spot, but I don't have a choice to watch what I want to enjoy. I would rather listen to free bands or see exhibitions than attach to an uncomfortable chair in the dark. Some people visiting Jeonju complain that Jeonju Bibimbap is not that delicious as much as the fame. If you desire to taste real Bibimbap you shouldn't go any restaurant. You have to go THE restaurants to sell traditional Bibimbap served in a brass bowl with bean sprout soup. One of the restaurants I like to go often is introduced in Michelin Guide.
강사 첨삭
Hi dear [이름]! Let me try your traditional 'Bibimbop' someday. I think some Korean restaurants here in our place offer this kind of food. This is actually a fried rice right? I believe so. Well anyway dear, we will talk more about this tomorrow Ma'am [이름]. Good night!
-Teacher Chloe
Jeonju International Film Festival is going to be held for a week from today.
>>Correct
There is a big opening ceremony in the Chonbuk University Cultural Auditorium that I used to spend free time when I was a University student.
>> There is a big opening ceremony in Chonbuk University Cultural Auditorium.
Famous actors and directors would be there, and people visit my city to watch independent movies looking forward to gourmet food.
>> Famous actors and directors will be there and there will be a lot of who will people visit my city to watch the said event.
The ironic thing for me is that I have never joined the festival. I mean that I have not watched the movies showed during the festival.
>>I find it very ironic because I never experienced to join the festival. I never tried watching movies being shown during the festival.
I tried to buy the ticket for coupled of times, but that was quickly sold out online.
>> I tried to buy a ticket for a couple of times, but tickets were quickly sold out online.
I can buy some ticket on the spot, but I don\'t have a choice to watch what I want to enjoy.
>> I can buy some ticket on the spot but I don't have any choice but to watch the movie I want.
I would rather listen to free bands or see exhibitions than attach to an uncomfortable chair in the dark.
>> I would rather listen to free live bands in a concert or see exhibitions than to be stuck in an uncomfortable chair in a dark place.
Some people visiting Jeonju complain that Jeonju Bibimbap is not that delicious as much as the fame.
>> Some people who visited Jeonju complained about 'Jeonju bibimbop' is not that delicious.
If you desire to taste real Bibimbap you shouldn\'t go any restaurant.
>> If you desire to taste real 'bibimbop' you shouldn\'t go to any restaurants.
You have to go THE restaurants to sell traditional 'bibimbop' served in a brass bowl with bean sprout soup.
>> You should go to the restaurants that offer the traditional 'bibimbop' served in a brass bowl with bean sprout soup.
One of the restaurants I like to go often is introduced in Michelin Guide.
>> One of the restaurants I like to visit often was adverstised in Michelin Guide.
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