Jeonse
학생이 쓴 원문
Jeonse becomes losing its popularity. Nowadays young people prefer monthly- paid rent fee. Of course, the elderly are used to Jeonse and they think it\'s better to save some money. However, Jeonse has a risk of losing money,especially when our economy is not good. So our government encourages us not to rent by Jeonse.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Come to think of it, Jeonse has been a part of Korean culture for a very long time, so losing its popularity would somewhat mean losing a part of Korean culture as well. I personally think Jeonse is a good system because you get your deposit at the end of the contract period, but you’re right, there are a lot of risks involved, and it is also influenced by the economy.
- T. Caitlyn
Jeonse becomes losing its popularity.
>> Jeonse is losing its popularity.
Nowadays young people prefer monthly- paid rent fee.
>> Nowadays, young people prefer monthly rent payments.
Of course, the elderly are used to Jeonse and they think it\'s better to save some money.
>> CORRECT
However, Jeonse has a risk of losing money,especially when our economy is not good.
>> However, Jeonse carries the risk of losing money, especially when our economy is not doing well.
So our government encourages us not to rent by Jeonse.
>> So our government encourages us not to rent through Jeonse.
>> So our government encourages us not to rent through Jeonse.
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