Jeonse or Weolse
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If a landlord wants to invest some money to business or some profitable projects, he or she offers Jeonse to tenants. But if a landlord needs some regular money for taxes or maintenance, Weolse is offered to tenants. In Korea, nowadays Jeonse is gradually changed to Weolse. Most tenants want to rent a house with a small amount of deposit in fear of Jeonse fraud. In addition, the interest of banks is so low that most landlords don\'t want to put their tenants\' deposits at a bank.For these reasons, many landlords offer Weolse more than Jeonse.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I see! Thank you for explaining to me clearly how landlords decide between Weolse and Jeonse. As I said in class, Jeonse is good in the sense that you can get your money back after the contract period. But if I were the landlord, I think I would prefer Weolse too, because at least it provides monthly income, which is why it is common in my country.
- T. Caitlyn
If a landlord wants to invest some money to business or some profitable projects, he or she offers Jeonse to tenants.
>> If a landlord wants to invest money in a business or profitable projects, he or she offers Jeonse to tenants
But if a landlord needs some regular money for taxes or maintenance, Weolse is offered to tenants.
>> CORRECT
In Korea, nowadays Jeonse is gradually changed to Weolse.
>> In Korea, Jeonse is gradually changing to Weolse nowadays.
Most tenants want to rent a house with a small amount of deposit in fear of Jeonse fraud.
>> Most tenants want to rent a house with a small deposit because they are afraid of Jeonse fraud.
In addition, the interest of banks is so low that most landlords don\'t want to put their tenants\' deposits at a bank.
>> In addition, bank interest rates are so low that most landlords don’t want to put their tenants’ deposits in a bank.
For these reasons, many landlords offer Weolse more than Jeonse.
>> CORRECT
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