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2015-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I will buy many house. I will go trip. I will buy the car. I will buy many clothes. I will eat good and expencive food. I will buy my mom and dad's present.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Wow....  So you will really spend a lot. ^^ I like what you wrote at the end. You will buy your mom and your dad some presents. What presents would that be? I want to know. hehe. What a generous kid you are. :)   I will see you then in our class. Have a great day ahead. :) See you in our class.   ~~ Teacher Kris   I will buy many house. >> I will buy many houses.I will go trip. >> I will go on for a trip.I will buy the car. >> I will buy a car.I will buy many clothes.>> CorrectI will eat good and expencive food. >> I will buy and eat expensive food.I will buy my mom and dad\'s present. >> I will buy my mom and my dad some presents.

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