Jhon's Home.Work^o^
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I will buy many house.
I will go trip.
I will buy the car.
I will buy many clothes.
I will eat good and expencive food.
I will buy my mom and dad's present.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Wow.... So you will really spend a lot. ^^
I like what you wrote at the end.
You will buy your mom and your dad some presents.
What presents would that be? I want to know. hehe.
What a generous kid you are. :)
I will see you then in our class.
Have a great day ahead. :)
See you in our class.
~~ Teacher Kris
I will buy many house.
>> I will buy many houses.I will go trip.
>> I will go on for a trip.I will buy the car.
>> I will buy a car.I will buy many clothes.>> CorrectI will eat good and expencive food.
>> I will buy and eat expensive food.I will buy my mom and dad\'s present.
>> I will buy my mom and my dad some presents.
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