Jindo dog is famous in Korea

2014-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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As I mentioned in the subject, In Korea "Jindo dog" is famous. Jindo is the name of a province of Korea. Of course, Jindo dog is named after the name of the country. Jindo dog is famous for loyalthy. Once it remember the owner, it won't forget his owner. So, Jindo never eat food which is fed by stranger. and there is interesting story about Jindo dog. There were a Jindo dog and an its owner. and he had to sell Jindo dog because of his finacial problems. He didn't have any choice but sell the dog. and the dog was transforted about 200 kilometer by truck. But Jindo dog, never forgot his owner and started to go to the journey to home. He walked and walked, finally he got back to the home!! Over 200 kilometer, He overcame the distance with his loyalthy. the owner of Jindo realized that the dog really love him so he decided to live together again. Probalbly, there is another story about specail animal, but I don't know another story. If I hear some new story, I will tel

강사 첨삭

What a lovely story, [이름].
Thanks for your time and for sharing this great story.
It is similar with the movie titled, \"Haichi\". 
Try to search it. I really love the movie.
I just watched it several months ago. Since then, that is already my favorite movie. 
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina

As I mentioned in the subject, In Korea \"Jindo dog\" is famous.
>> As I mentioned above, \"Jindo dog\" is famous. 
Jindo is the name of a province of Korea.
>> correct
>> OR: Jindo is a province name in Korea. 
Of course, Jindo dog is named after the name of the country.
>> correct
Jindo dog is famous for loyalthy.
>> Jindo dog is famous for its loyalty. 
Once it remember the owner, it won\'t forget his owner.
>> Once it remembers the owner, it won\'t forget him/her.
So, Jindo never eat food which is fed by stranger.
>> So, Jindo never eats food which is given by a stranger.
and there is interesting story about Jindo dog.
>> And there is an interesting story about Jindo dog. 
There were a Jindo dog and an its owner.
>> There was a Jindo dog and its owner. 
and he had to sell Jindo dog because of his finacial problems.
>> correct ( spelling check: financial ^^) 
He didn\'t have any choice but sell the dog.
>> He didn\'t have any choice but to sell the dog. 
and the dog was transforted about 200 kilometer by truck.
>> And the dog was transported for about 200 kilometers by truck. 

But Jindo dog, never forgot his owner and started to go to the journey to home.
>> But Jindo dog never forget its owner and started its journey home. 
He walked and walked, finally he got back to the home!!\\
>> He walked for some time and finally it got home.
Over 200 kilometer, He overcame the distance with his loyalthy.
>> He traveled 200 kilometers and he surpassed the distance because of its loyalty.
the owner of Jindo realized that the dog really love him so he decided to live together again.
>> The owner of the Jindo realized that the dog really loves him. So, he decided to live together again. 

Probalbly, there is another story about specail animal, but I don\'t know another story. 
>> Probably, there is another story about a special animal but I don\'t know any. 
If I hear some new story, I will tel
>> If I will hear a new story, I will tell you. 

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