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2022-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I will coose a stressful job but high pay, because I think it is hard to earn money, so all of job are stressful. To get a high pay, I will do more stressful job.

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I will coose a stressful job but high pay, because I think it is hard to earn money, so all of job are stressful.

>> I will choose a stressful job with a high paying salary because I think it is hard to earn money. This is why all jobs are stressful.

To get a high pay, I will do more stressful job.
>>To get a high pay, I will do a more stressful job.

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