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I'm seeking for employment.
Actually, about 2 months ago I were working in a hospital.
It's my first job.
Working environment is good. but I quit only in a month.
There are some reason.
Main reason is head of the hospital.
Even though he is oder, I couldn't bear his impertinence.
If there another reason that is age.
Average age of employees is my parents' age.
So I'm lonely a little.
It is almost 2 months after I quit.
It is hard to get a new job.
but I'm not regret I have quit.
Of course I want to get out of jobless.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lindsay! Thank you for sending this message. Well, it's a good thing you quit that job. No matter how great the job is, if the working environment is not good then it's useless. It's not worth it to stay working with people that you don't like. Your performance will suffer and you can't concentrate at work. I always make it a point to have a good working relationship with my co-workers so if there's any problem, I try to fix it immediately because I don't want any troubles. Although it's really difficult to get along with your co-workers especially if there is a big age gap. I hope you find a better job soon. Good luck! Fighting! Take care Lindsay! I'll call you up tomorrow!
= T. Marie =
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>> correct^^
I'm seeking for employment.
>> correct^^Actually, about 2 months ago I were working in a hospital.
>> Actually, about 2 months ago I was working at a hospital.
It's my first job.
>> It was my first job.
**It's a past event so we use the past tense of is which is was.Working environment is good. but I quit only in a month.
>> The working environment was good, but I quit after just a month.
There are some reason.
>> There were some reasons.
Main reason is head of the hospital.
>> The main reason was the head of the hospital.Even though he is oder, I couldn't bear his impertinence.
>> Even though he is older, I couldn't bear his impertinence.If there another reason that is age.
>> If there is another reason, it could be the age gap.Average age of employees is my parents' age.
>> The average age of the employees are around my parents' age.So I'm lonely a little.
>> So I'm a little lonely.It is almost 2 months after I quit.
>> It's almost been 2 months since I quit.It is hard to get a new job.
>> correct^^but I'm not regret I have quit.
>> But I don't regret quitting.Of course I want to get out of jobless.>> Of course I want to stop being jobless.
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