Job Interview Q&A 2
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What do your bosses rate(or evaluate) you?
A. So far, I have had many bosses who were kind, strict, aggressive or demanding.
From these bosses, They used to tell me that I am very detailed at any tasks that I am doing and
I am the person who cleared missions without any mistakes.
Some bosses told me I was very aggressive so they like me. likewise, some didn\'t because I was too aggressive.
However, on average, they didn\'t need to take any extra cares about the business
Because I always prepared for the resolutions.and I also had alternative answers be ready
even if the resolutions didn\'t work.
That\'s why most of them liked me and were dependent on me at that time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I made some changes to common expressions you can use in the business world.
Our goal is to sound professional and clear at the same time.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
So far, I have had many bosses who were kind, strict, aggressive or demanding.
>> Correct
From these bosses, They used to tell me that I am very detailed at any tasks that I am doing and I am the person who cleared missions without any mistakes.
From these bosses, They used to tell me that I am very detailed at any tasks that I am doing and I am the person who cleared missions without any mistakes.
>> According to these bosses, I am very detailed with the tasks that I am doing and I am the person who could accomplish them without any mistakes.
Some bosses told me I was very aggressive so they like me.
Some bosses told me I was very aggressive so they like me.
>> Some bosses told me I was very aggressive and that\'s why, they liked me.
likewise, some didn\'t because I was too aggressive.
>> On the other hand, some didn\'t because I was too aggressive.
However, on average, they didn\'t need to take any extra cares about the business Because I always prepared for the resolutions.
However, on average, they didn\'t need to take any extra cares about the business Because I always prepared for the resolutions.
>> However, on average, they didn\'t need to worry about anything unexpected concerning the business because I always prepared resolutions.
and I also had alternative answers be ready even if the resolutions didn\'t work.
>> I also had alternative answers ready even if the resolutions didn\'t work.
That\'s why most of them liked me and were dependent on me at that time.
That\'s why most of them liked me and were dependent on me at that time.
>> That\'s why most of them liked me and they relied on me at that time.
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