Job Interview Q & A

2020-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Q1. What kinds of qualifications & skills do you have related with this position? A1. First, I have great communication skills. I communicate effectively with individuals at all levels and possess proven people management and liaison skills. I have a diplomatic, persuasive and articulate communication style to establish and maintain rapport with internal & external executive level people. Second, I know how to work. I have a variety of experiences in executive review for a complex business development process Including opportunity identification, developing business cases and wining projects for both local & global mega programs. I have an ability to gather and communicate market intelligence in order to anticipate Emerging trends within the related industry and hedge against competitor strategies. Of course, I have ability to work under pressure, multitask and handle a diverse workload independently.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your work today.
I gave some alternative sentences to give you options.
We can practice and discuss later in our class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, I have great communication skills. 
>> Correct
I communicate effectively with individuals at all levels and possess proven people management and liaison skills.
>> Correct
I have a diplomatic, persuasive and articulate communication style to establish and maintain rapport with internal & external executive level people.
>> Correct
OR>> I am known to be diplomatic, persuasive and articulate when I communicate to establish rapport with executives from all levels, whether internal or external.
Second, I know how to work.
>> Correct
I have a variety of experiences in executive review for a complex business development process.
>> Correct
Including opportunity identification, developing business cases and wining projects for both local & global mega programs.
>> This includes opportunity identification, developing business cases and winning projects for both local & global mega programs.
I have an ability to gather and communicate market intelligence in order to anticipate Emerging trends within the related industry and hedge against competitor strategies.
>> I have an ability to gather and communicate market intelligence in order to anticipate emerging trends within the related industry and hedge against competitor strategies.
Of course, I have ability to work under pressure, multitask and handle a diverse workload independently.
>> Correct

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