Job Interview Q & A
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. What kinds of qualifications & skills do you have related with this position?
A1. First, I have great communication skills. I communicate effectively with individuals at all levels and possess proven people management and liaison skills.
I have a diplomatic, persuasive and articulate communication style to establish and maintain rapport with internal & external executive level people.
Second, I know how to work.
I have a variety of experiences in executive review for a complex business development process
Including opportunity identification, developing business cases and wining projects
for both local & global mega programs.
I have an ability to gather and communicate market intelligence in order to anticipate
Emerging trends within the related industry and hedge against competitor strategies.
Of course, I have ability to work under pressure, multitask and handle a diverse workload independently.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your work today.
I gave some alternative sentences to give you options.
We can practice and discuss later in our class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, I have great communication skills.
>> Correct
I communicate effectively with individuals at all levels and possess proven people management and liaison skills.
>> Correct
I have a diplomatic, persuasive and articulate communication style to establish and maintain rapport with internal & external executive level people.
I have a diplomatic, persuasive and articulate communication style to establish and maintain rapport with internal & external executive level people.
>> Correct
OR>> I am known to be diplomatic, persuasive and articulate when I communicate to establish rapport with executives from all levels, whether internal or external.
Second, I know how to work.
Second, I know how to work.
>> Correct
I have a variety of experiences in executive review for a complex business development process.
I have a variety of experiences in executive review for a complex business development process.
>> Correct
Including opportunity identification, developing business cases and wining projects for both local & global mega programs.
>> This includes opportunity identification, developing business cases and winning projects for both local & global mega programs.
I have an ability to gather and communicate market intelligence in order to anticipate Emerging trends within the related industry and hedge against competitor strategies.
>> I have an ability to gather and communicate market intelligence in order to anticipate emerging trends within the related industry and hedge against competitor strategies.
Of course, I have ability to work under pressure, multitask and handle a diverse workload independently.
Of course, I have ability to work under pressure, multitask and handle a diverse workload independently.
>> Correct
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