job interview1
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hello~ good morning!
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since 5 years ago, only on before national holidays, I used to work at fruit store. Because there are many customers for holiday present. I worked hard always. So the owner of the store call me every year.
also I have been academy lecturer and working for stage installation
My key strength is my educational background in the Mechanical Engineering
I have studied very hard because I like my major
The other strength is to interact.
I can interact with various people. Through my part time jobs I acquired how can I interact with other people.
I think my weakness is lack of ability to react instantly.
However this weakness make me more planned.
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thanks!
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. This is a good way to prepare for your job interview! Just practice more! I know that with constant practice, you will become confident. Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
hello~ good morning!
>> Hello! Good morning!------------------------since 5 years ago, only on before national holidays, I used to work at fruit store.
>> I used to work at a fruit store before national holidays.
>> Five yeras ago, I worked at a fruit store before the start of national holiday.
Because there are many customers for holiday present.
>> Because there were many customers buying holiday presents.
I worked hard always.
>> Correct!
So the owner of the store call me every year.
>> So, the owner of the store calls me every year.
>> or: So, the store owner calls me every year.also I have been academy lecturer and working for stage installation>> Also, I have been an academy lecturer and worked for stage installation.My key strength is my educational background in the Mechanical Engineering>> My key strength is my educational background in Mechanical Engineering.
I have studied very hard because I like my major
>> Correct!The other strength is to interact.
>> I am also good at interacting with other people.
>> I have a very good interpersonal skills.I can interact with various people.
>> Correct!Through my part time jobs I acquired how can I interact with other people.
>> Through my job experiences, I have learned how to interact with other people.I think my weakness is lack of ability to react instantly.
>> I think my weakness is my lack of ability to react instantly.However this weakness make me more planned.
>> However, this wekness makes me to prepare on something ahead of time.-----------------------thanks!
>> Correct!
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