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2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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hello~ good morning! ------------------------ since 5 years ago, only on before national holidays, I used to work at fruit store. Because there are many customers for holiday present. I worked hard always. So the owner of the store call me every year. also I have been academy lecturer and working for stage installation My key strength is my educational background in the Mechanical Engineering I have studied very hard because I like my major The other strength is to interact. I can interact with various people. Through my part time jobs I acquired how can I interact with other people. I think my weakness is lack of ability to react instantly. However this weakness make me more planned. ----------------------- thanks!

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. This is a good way to prepare for your job interview! Just practice more! I know that with constant practice, you will become confident. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ hello~ good morning! >> Hello! Good morning!------------------------since 5 years ago, only on before national holidays, I used to work at fruit store. >> I used to work at a fruit store before national holidays. >> Five yeras ago, I worked at a fruit store before the start of national holiday. Because there are many customers for holiday present. >> Because there were many customers buying holiday presents. I worked hard always. >> Correct! So the owner of the store call me every year. >> So, the owner of the store calls me every year. >> or: So, the store owner calls me every year.also I have been academy lecturer and working for stage installation>> Also, I have been an academy lecturer and worked for stage installation.My key strength is my educational background in the Mechanical Engineering>> My key strength is my educational background in Mechanical Engineering. I have studied very hard because I like my major >> Correct!The other strength is to interact. >> I am also good at interacting with other people. >> I have a very good interpersonal skills.I can interact with various people. >> Correct!Through my part time jobs I acquired how can I interact with other people. >> Through my job experiences, I have learned how to interact with other people.I think my weakness is lack of ability to react instantly. >> I think my weakness is my lack of ability to react instantly.However this weakness make me more planned. >> However, this wekness makes me to prepare on something ahead of time.-----------------------thanks! >> Correct!

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