job transfer
학생이 쓴 원문
it is a huge complicated thing I have ever experienced in my whole life. I have changed my job recentely and it gives me a lot pressure because of the complicating and the annoying.
I am not good at transfering the company. Actually whoelse could be an expert of that thing.
I had to submit resignation forms to the HR and fulfill the process of it andthen I had to do the thing for the new employee for the this new company.
Anyway it is the my last chance to achive my goal if it is not working well the I have to have a normal career life.
I decide to take a venture and it's my first trying I always keep myself in the safe and security
I hope I will achive from this oppotunity
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름],
Good afternoon! Thank you for taking time to send your composition. I really appreciate your effort. I wish the best of luck in all your ventures. Keep trying. See you later!
-Tiny^0^
It is a huge complicated thing I have ever experienced in my whole life.
>>It is the most complicated thing I have ever experienced in my life.
I have changed my job recentely and it gives me a lot pressure because of the complicating and the annoying.>>I changed my job recently because it gives me a lot of pressure. It\'s complicated and annoying.I am not good at transfering the company.
>>I\'m not good at transfering in a company.
Actually whoelse could be an expert of that thing.>>Anyway, who would be an expert in doing that thing.I had to submit resignation forms to the HR and fulfill the process of it andthen I had to do the thing for the new employee for the this new company.>>I had to submit resignation forms to the HR and fulfill the process. And then I have to do the thing for new employees in a new company.Anyway it is the my last chance to achive my goal if it is not working well the I have to have a normal career life.>>SPELLING CHECK: achieve
>>Anyway, it is my last chance to achieve my goal if it is not gonig to work well, I have to go back to my normal life.I decide to take a venture and it\'s my first trying I always keep myself in the safe and security >>I decided to venture in and at first I always try to keep safe and secured.I hope I will achive from this oppotunity
>>SPELLING CHECK: achieve
>>I hope I can take this oppurtunity.
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