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Help me~I think maby the manager would ask that question to me ..kk
Which problem is the most difficult to you when you were working as a housekeeper before?
when I worked motel , one of my client claim that they wanted to change new linnen but that time I had just changed linen. It was new.. somehow of couses I changed again. and I realized , although as I see something was perfect , if the costomer can't satisfied it, it means we have to make an effort more for client to be happy , gratified.
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Dearest [이름], i just finished reading your composition. I'll try my very best to check on the errors and improve your explanation on the possible question of the housekeeper manager.
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Help me~I think maby the manager would ask that question to me ..kk
>>I need your help because I think that maybe the manager will ask me this question. Ok?
Which problem is the most difficult to you when you were working as a housekeeper before?>> What is the most difficult situation you encountered when you worked as a housekeeper before?when I worked motel , one of my client claim that they wanted to change new linnen but that time I had just changed linen.
>> The most difficult situation I encountered when I worked as a housekeeper is to please customers. When I worked in a motel, one of my clients wanted to have their linen changed and so, I changed it and made their bed's a relaxing place to lie on.
It was new.. somehow of couses I changed again. and I realized , although as I see something was perfect , if the costomer can't satisfied it, it means we have to make an effort more for client to be happy , gratified.
>> I am going to rephrase your sentence [이름] and It goes like this:
>> Although, I thought it was perfect, if the customer wasn't satisfied with what I did, I need to exert more effort to please and to comply with their demands. I know it was a tough job for me especially to please them, but the best part of it, is that when you were able to satisfy them with the service that you rendered and you see them smiling, that was the most rewarding part.
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