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2020-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi Gabby! I thanks to introduce your mother. I want to know your family but I unfortunatly can\\\'t speak English. I am heartbroken. Will I speak English at some future day? My daughter wants to know your baby. She likes much baby. My silbings are doing a banger, a university professor and manaage bookstore. The one of is a retire. Andther sisters are housewife. I have cousins 16 person. They have various job who a lawer, a banker, an office worker, a accounting etc. They almost don\\\'t married. Our nationa people marry trend later these days. I don\\\'t know well that right or false. I want to my children to marriage. Bye Gabby. I am sorry. I am sad thinking my parents. They can\'t walk and look gave up thinking themselves. We were a big family. I learned doing by myself. They were always busy that they provide for their children. We grew up without thinking. I attached again. I did impertinent homework.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Thanks for sharing about your family. Good job! :)
- T. Gabby.
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
I thanks to introduce your mother. 
>> Thanks for introducing your mother.
I want to know your family but I unfortunatly can\\\'t speak English.
>> I want to get to know your family but I can\'t speak in English.
I am heartbroken. Will I speak English at some future day?
>> I am heartbroken. Will I be able to speak in English someday?
My daughter wants to know your baby. 
>> Correct.
She likes much baby.
>> She likes baby so much.
My silbings are doing a banger, a university professor and manaage bookstore. 
>> My siblings are doing different jobs. They are a banger, a university professor and the one manages a bookstore.
The one of is a retire.
>> The other one is a retiree.
Andther sisters are housewife.
>> And my other sister is a housewife.
I have cousins 16 person.
>> I have 16 cousins.
They have various job who a lawer, a banker, an office worker, a accounting etc.
>> They have various jobs. A lawyers, a banker, an office worker, an accountant, etc.
They almost don\\\'t married. 
>> They didn\'t get married.
Our nationa people marry trend later these days.
>> The trend here is people do not really get married.
I don\\\'t know well that right or false.
>> I don\'t know if that\'s right or wrong.
I want to my children to marriage.
>> I want my children to get married.
Bye Gabby.
>> Correct.

I am sorry.
>> Correct.
I am sad thinking my parents. 
>> I feel sad thinking about my parents.
They can\'t walk and look gave up thinking themselves.
>> They can\'t walk and they don\'t think about themselves.
We were a big family.
>> We are a big family.
 I learned doing by myself.
>> I learned to be independent.
They were always busy that they provide for their children. 
>> They were always busy working to provide for us.
We grew up without thinking.
>> Correct.
I attached again. 
>> I attached it again.
I did impertinent homework.
>> Correct.

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