jobs
학생이 쓴 원문
We could not be called discrimination about this phenomenon.
From company\'s point of view, it is natural that they want to hire who skillful and experienced person.
The worst cause of all this problem is related with rapid population decline.
Historically population decline and industry decline always occur together.
It is vicious cycle.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
Great job for expressing your thoughts about the article. Yes, most companies nowadays are looking for workers who can be an asset. That is to avoid wasting time, energy, and funds. I am just concerned about the newly graduated, how can they get experience if no one will hire them?
Aki~
We could not be called discrimination about this phenomenon.
>>> We could not be called discriminatory about this phenomenon.
From company\'s point of view, it is natural that they want to hire who skillful and experienced person.
>>> From the company\'s point of view, it is natural that they want to hire who skillful and experienced person.
The worst cause of all this problem is related with rapid population decline.
>>> The worst cause of all these problems is related to rapid population decline.
Historically population decline and industry decline always occur together.
>>> Historically, population decline and industry decline have always occurred together.
It is vicious cycle.
>>> It is a vicious cycle.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.