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2013-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Today's article talks about jobs especially differences between self-employed and employees. Bussinessman's advantages are that they have the power to decide things by themselves. But huge responsibility follow. So, they have to take a responsibility for their decision. The other way, Every employee has less job responsibilities than employer. And they can have a stable position compare to employer. The author throws question which is happier? But who is happier is not the question. We have a right to deicide where we belong to

강사 첨삭

A great and happy Friday Mr. [Name]! 

I hope you\'ll have  a great weekend with your family. 
And you\'ll also enjoy the things that you are going to do. 

And on you choosing to become and employees rather than an employee,  you chose it not to be stressed out and to have more time with your family. 

I hope that more businessmen and employees should have that kind of attitude.

Because mostly, they don\'t have time anymore for their family. 

Anyway, catch you up on Monday! 

Have fun! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


Today\'s article talks about jobs especially differences between self-employed and employees.

>>  Today\'s article talks about jobs especially the differences between self-employed and employees.

Bussinessman\'s advantages are that they have the power to decide things by themselves.

>> The businessman\'s advantage is that they have the power to decide things by themselves. 

But huge responsibility follow.

>> But a huge responsibility follows. 

So, they have to take a responsibility for their decision.

>> So they have to take the responsibility on their decisions. 

The other way, Every employee has less job responsibilities than employer.

>> On the other hand, every employees has less job than the employer. 

And they can have a stable position compare to employer.

>> And they can have a stable position comparing to the employer. 

The author throws question which is happier?

>> The author throws the question, which is happier? 

But who is happier is not the question.

>> correct! 

We have a right to deicide where we belong to

>> correct! (spelling correction-decide)

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