jog
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whenever i do jogging, i go to the HAN river park.
i like to jog while looking at the great scenery.
and you know there is a great scenery
there are many trees and variou flowers so i can breath in fresh air
that\'s i like go to HAN river park when i do jogging
anyway it is located in seoul so it takes about 30 minutes to get there by bus
and in the HAN river park, i ususally jog for about 1 hour
after that, i go to a convenient store and buys berverage
it gives me pleasure to drink after jogging
i plan to do jogging tonight at the Han river park!!
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whenever i do jogging, i go to the HAN river park.
>>Whenever I go jogging, I go to Hangang Park.
i like to jog while looking at the great scenery.
>>I like jogging while looking at the nice scenery.
and you know there is a great scenery
>>And you know there is a great scenery.
OR: And you know that there is a wonderful view.
there are many trees and variou flowers so i can breath in fresh air
>>There are many trees and various flowers so you can breathe in fresh air.
that\'s i like go to HAN river park when i do jogging
>>That\'s what I like when I go jogging at Han river park.
anyway it is located in seoul so it takes about 30 minutes to get there by bus
and in the HAN river park,
>>Anyway, I\'m in Seoul, so it takes about 30 minutes by bus to Han river park.
i ususally jog for about 1 hour
>>I usually jog for one hour.
after that, i go to a convenient store and buys berverage
>>After that, I go to the convenience store and buy a drink.
it gives me pleasure to drink after jogging
>>Enjoying the drink makes me feel refreshed.
i plan to do jogging tonight at the Han river park!!
>>I plan to go for a run tonight at Han river park.
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