jogging

2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually go jogging on weekends because I am too busy to jog during the week. I perfer to go jogging during the night. I like to jog with my family. My children like to jog too. We usually go to the park near our apartment after dinner. There are many neighbors and children. When we back home, we often eat icecream.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You did a great job. Some reminders:1. Complete your sentence. Make sure that you don\'t miss the verb in this sentence. When we arrive home, we often eat ice cream. 2. \'Ice cream\' is the correct spelling.   Teacher Venus^^   I usually go jogging on weekends because I am too busy to jog during the week.>>>CORRECT   I perfer to go jogging during the night. >>>CORRECT I like to jog with my family. >>>CORRECT My children like to jog too.>>>CORRECT   We usually go to the park near our apartment after dinner.>>>CORRECT   There are many neighbors and children.>>>CORRECT   When we back home, we often eat icecream. >>>When we arrive home, we often eat ice cream.

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