journal of the day of 7.24 part2

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q1 - I go there every _. day days Either Q2 - They looked at each _. other Q3 - Everybody _ there. was Q4 - They're always phoning one _ each other Q5 - I spoke to _ of the delegates there. each Q6 - I spoke to _ of them. each Q7 - _ step of the way was a struggle. Either could be used here. Q8 - Read _ of the instructions carefully. each Q9 - I enjoyed _ minute of the film. every Q10 - I spoke to _ of them. every one To make matter worse, there was a plan to escape from virtual fire at 12:30. I wanted to go bed in the evening because of the duty but It was no use because of the plan. I wanted to sleep more but I had only at most 5 hours. So there wasn't no way out from dozing while we have class. and I had just finished reading " The third mankind Vol.2" which of writer is Berber. It was really fun. I can't wait reading Vol.3 of the book. but it is already borrowed by someone, so I need to find another interesting book.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!Thanks again for your essay. I want to look for that book too. I hope that I will be able to find it. Please share more about this tomorrow. Talk to you tomorrow. Have a great night. Teacher Nina   Q1 - I go there every _.day days Either >> day Q2 - They looked at each _.other >> Correct! Q3 - Everybody _ there.was >> Correct! Q4 - They\'re always phoning one _each other >> anotherQ5 - I spoke to _ of the delegates there.each >> Correct! Q6 - I spoke to _ of them.each >> Correct! Q7 - _ step of the way was a struggle.Either could be used here. >> Correct! Q8 - Read _ of the instructions carefully.each >> Correct! Q9 - I enjoyed _ minute of the film.every >> Correct! Q10 - I spoke to _ of them.every one >> Correct! To make matter worse, there was a plan to escape from virtual fire at 12:30. >> Correct! I wanted to go bed in the evening because of the duty >> I wanted to go to bed in the evening because of the duty. but It was no use because of the plan. >> But it was useless because of the plan.  I wanted to sleep more but I had only at most 5 hours. >> I wanted to sleep more but I only had at least five hours. So there wasn\'t no way out from dozing while we have class. >> So there wasn\'t any way to doze while we have the class. and I had just finished reading \" The third mankind Vol.2\" which of writer is Berber. >> And I just finished reading the book titled \" The Third Mankind Vol. 2\", the writer is Berber. It was really fun. >> Correct! I can\'t wait reading Vol.3 of the book. >> Correct! but it is already borrowed by someone, so I need to find another interesting book. >> Correct!

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