journal of the day of 7.24 part2
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1 - I go there every _.
day days Either
Q2 - They looked at each _.
other
Q3 - Everybody _ there.
was
Q4 - They're always phoning one _
each other
Q5 - I spoke to _ of the delegates there.
each
Q6 - I spoke to _ of them.
each
Q7 - _ step of the way was a struggle.
Either could be used here.
Q8 - Read _ of the instructions carefully.
each
Q9 - I enjoyed _ minute of the film.
every
Q10 - I spoke to _ of them.
every one
To make matter worse, there was a plan to escape from virtual fire at 12:30.
I wanted to go bed in the evening because of the duty
but It was no use because of the plan. I wanted to sleep more but I had only at most 5 hours. So there wasn't no way out from dozing while we have class.
and I had just finished reading " The third mankind Vol.2" which of writer is Berber. It was really fun. I can't wait reading Vol.3 of the book. but it is already borrowed by someone, so I need to find another interesting book.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!Thanks again for your essay.
I want to look for that book too.
I hope that I will be able to find it.
Please share more about this tomorrow.
Talk to you tomorrow. Have a great night.
Teacher Nina
Q1 - I go there every _.day days Either
>> day Q2 - They looked at each _.other
>> Correct! Q3 - Everybody _ there.was
>> Correct! Q4 - They\'re always phoning one _each other
>> anotherQ5 - I spoke to _ of the delegates there.each
>> Correct! Q6 - I spoke to _ of them.each
>> Correct! Q7 - _ step of the way was a struggle.Either could be used here.
>> Correct! Q8 - Read _ of the instructions carefully.each
>> Correct! Q9 - I enjoyed _ minute of the film.every
>> Correct! Q10 - I spoke to _ of them.every one
>> Correct! To make matter worse, there was a plan to escape from virtual fire at 12:30.
>> Correct! I wanted to go bed in the evening because of the duty
>> I wanted to go to bed in the evening because of the duty. but It was no use because of the plan.
>> But it was useless because of the plan.
I wanted to sleep more but I had only at most 5 hours.
>> I wanted to sleep more but I only had at least five hours.
So there wasn\'t no way out from dozing while we have class.
>> So there wasn\'t any way to doze while we have the class. and I had just finished reading \" The third mankind Vol.2\" which of writer is Berber.
>> And I just finished reading the book titled \" The Third Mankind Vol. 2\", the writer is Berber.
It was really fun.
>> Correct!
I can\'t wait reading Vol.3 of the book.
>> Correct!
but it is already borrowed by someone, so I need to find another interesting book.
>> Correct!
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