Joyful and energetic person

2020-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

If I pass away someday, I want to be remembered as a joyful and energetic person. When I was a student, I was considered as a bright and active girl in the student record. I\'ve enjoyed meeting people, talking about some topics, and sympathize with each other. Nowadays, I couldn\'t meet friends because of COVID-19, I really want to meet my lovely buddies...

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thanks for the response to the homework you were given. I think that\'s a great way to be remembered- a joyful and energetic person. I do think that you are a cheerful person as you speak brightly in our conversations. ^ ^ Let\'s hope that the pandemic will be solved soon, so you can meet and talk with your buddies more.

If I pass away someday, I want to be remembered as a joyful and energetic person.

>> correct

>> If I leave the earth someday, I want to be remembered as someone joyful and energetic.

When I was a student, I was considered as a bright and active girl in the student record.

>> correct

>> I was considered as a bright and active girl when I was a student.

I\'ve enjoyed meeting people, talking about some topics, and sympathize with each other.

>> I\'ve enjoyed meeting people, talking about some topics and sympathizing with each other.
Nowadays, I couldn\'t meet friends because of COVID-19, I really want to meet my lovely buddies...

>> correct

>> These days, I couldn\'t hang out with my friends because of the pandemic; I really want to meet my lovely buddies.

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