Judgment for first impression
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think people shouldn\'t judge a person\'s character quickly.
>>> CORRECT
I got a lesson from one who met 2 years ago.
>>> I got a lesson from someone who met 1 years ago.
She were seem to be overly proud.
>>> She seemed to be overly proud.
She didn\'t greeting at me when I went to her house warming party.
>>> She didn\'t greet me when I went to her house warming party.
I was sure that she didn\'t like me.
>>> CORRECT
I was discomfit.
>>> CORRECT
I decided not to try to make relationship closer with her, because I don\'t like an arrogant person.
>>> I tried not to make a close relationship with her, because I don\'t like an arrogant person.
Even though there were many chances to met her from time to time, I didn\'t smile at her.
>>> CORRECT
I have known her character, I feel sorry for her.
>>> I have known her character and I feel sorry for her.
Any judgment couldn\'t be true because it\'s love not to judge anyone.
>>> CORRECT
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