Judgment for first impression

2019-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

I think people shouldn\'t judge a person\'s character quickly. I got a lesson from one who met 2 years ago. She were seem to be overly proud. She didn\'t greeting at me when I went to her house warming party. I was sure that she didn\'t like me. I was discomfit. I decided not to try to make relationship closer with her, because I don\'t like an arrogant person. Even though there were many chances to met her from time to time, I didn\'t smile at her. I have known her character, I feel sorry for her. Any judgement couldn\'t be true because it\'s love not to judge anyone.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]~! Thanks for answering the essay question with all your ideas. I really appreciate it~! See you tomorrow~!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I think people shouldn\'t judge a person\'s character quickly.

>>> CORRECT

I got a lesson from one who met 2 years ago.

>>> I got a lesson from someone who met 1 years ago.

She were seem to be overly proud.

>>> She seemed to be overly proud.

She didn\'t greeting at me when I went to her house warming party.

>>> She didn\'t greet me when I went to her house warming party. 

I was sure that she didn\'t like me.

>>> CORRECT

I was discomfit.

>>> CORRECT

I decided not to try to make relationship closer with her, because I don\'t like an arrogant person.

>>> I tried not to make a close relationship with her, because I don\'t like an arrogant person.

Even though there were many chances to met her from time to time, I didn\'t smile at her.

>>> CORRECT

I have known her character, I feel sorry for her. 

>>> I have known her character and I feel sorry for her. 

Any judgment couldn\'t be true because it\'s love not to judge anyone.

>>> CORRECT

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·