July 12th\'s homework

2024-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

학생이 쓴 원문

I think I quite consider the design and ambiance of the restaurant. Because I tend to remember the taste with others. When I eat at a restaurant with nice ambiance, I feel even more delicious. It\'s dosen\'t matter if the design is refined or not. But i\'m satisfied if the food and environment are harmonized.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 

I agree! Sometimes, a great ambience in a restaurant should be partnered with delicious food. 


-Teacher Ash


I think I quite consider the design and ambiance of the restaurant.

>>> I will consider the design and ambience of the restaurant. 


Because I tend to remember the taste with others. 

>>> It’s because I tend to compare the taste with how the restaurant makes me feel. 


When I eat at a restaurant with nice ambiance, I feel even more delicious.

>>> When I eat at a restaurant with a lovely ambience, I expect they will also serve delicious food. 


 It\'s dosen\'t matter if the design is refined or not.

>>> It doesn\'t matter if the design is refined or not.


 But i\'m satisfied if the food and environment are harmonized.

>>> Nevertheless, I am satisfied if the environment and the food complement each other. 


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