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2024-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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My favorite character is Rocket in Guardians of the galaxy. He looks so cute racoon but he has rude and angry personality when dealing with people. Even though. He has a warm heart. He is considerate and sacrifices for his team. That\'s an unexpected charming point. And he\'s handy with weapons, so he can create any weapons he wants. He is good at handling any guns, of course. That\'s why my favorite character is Rocket.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing about your favorite character. I like Rocket too, but I like Groot even more. ^^

-Teacher Ash

My favorite character is Rocket in Guardians of the galaxy.

>> My favorite character is Rocket in Guardians of the Galaxy.

He looks so cute racoon but he has rude and angry personality when dealing with people.

>> He is a cute raccoon with a rude and angry personality especially when dealing with people.

Even though. He has a warm heart.

>> Nevertheless, he has a soft heart.

He is considerate and sacrifices for his team.

>> CORRECT

That\'s an unexpected charming point.

>> That\'s an unexpected, charming point.

And he\'s handy with weapons, so he can create any weapons he wants.

>> He is also handy with weapons, which means he can create any weapon.

He is good at handling any guns, of course.

>> He is good at handling guns, too.

That\'s why my favorite character is Rocket.

>> CORRECT

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