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Hi [이름] [이름],
I also love Mamma Mia, but I haven’t watched the musical show. I’ve only watched a movie of it. It was wonderful!
- Ash
My favorite theatre show is Mammamia.
>> My favorite theatre show is Mamma Mia.
Because the music and perfomence are very excting.
>> It’s because the music and performance are very exciting.
Especially the rhuthm of the first song that comes out makes me very excited.
>> The rhythm of the first song that plays always gets me really excited.
When I listen that music, I want to dance with actors.
>> When I listened to that music, I wanted to dance with actors.
And it is good to enjoy without thinking or focusing too much.
>> It was good to just enjoy the performance without thinking or focusing too much.
But they makes me happy.
>>It makes me happy watching the whole show.
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