July 22th homework
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My favorite movie is entitled Guardians of the Galaxy.
It was shown in movie theaters on 2014 July.
I like this movie because of the entertaning story and fancy computer graphics.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing. You almost got this. Just be mindful of the spelling and the preposition. I know you can do it. ^^
-Teacher Ash
My favorite movie is entitled Guardians of the Galaxy.
>>CORRECT
It was shown in movie theaters on 2014 July.
>>It was shown in movie theaters in July 2014.
I like this movie because of the entertaning story and fancy computer graphics.
>>I like this movie because of the entertaining story and fancy computer graphics.
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