July 26th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I catch-up my friends on each birthday.
Laid-back mindset reduces the mistakes.
I feel calmness when I organize my messy room.
There\'s no chance to socialize new people.
The frequency of eating out has decreased since COVID.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름],
Well done! You are almost there. Let’s talk about the corrections later. ^^
-Teacher Ash
I catch-up my friends on each birthday.
>>I catch up with my friends on each of their birthdays.
Laid-back mindset reduces the mistakes.
>> A laid-back mindset reduces mistakes.
I feel calmness when I organize my messy room.
>> I feel calm when I organize my messy room.
There\'s no chance to socialize new people.
>> There\'s no chance to socialize with new people.
The frequency of eating out has decreased since COVID.
>> CORRECT
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