July 31th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How you start your day
I usually wake up at 8:30.
I eat breakfast at 12:00 after swimming.
Usual activities
I spend my day alone watching Youtube and Netflix.
I usually take the opportunity to read a book or clean my room.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Great job in completing your homework! Keep it up.
-Teacher Ash
How you start your day
>>> How do you start your day?
I usually wake up at 8:30.
>>CORRECT
OR >> I usually wake up at 8:30 in the morning.
I eat breakfast at 12:00 after swimming.
>> I eat breakfast at 12:00 noon after swimming.
Usual activities
>> Usual Activities
I spend my day alone watching Youtube and Netflix.
>> I spend my day alone watching YouTube and Netflix.
I usually take the opportunity to read a book or clean my room.
>>CORRECT
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