July 5th\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
I would have loved to learn a new language too. I think it is really interesting.
-Teacher Ash
If I haven\'t take acting, I won\'t go to the college.
>> If I haven\'t taken acting, I won\'t go to college.
Because I don\'t have any plans except acting.
>>It’s because I don’t have any plans except for acting.
But instead of going to college, I would have gone to a theater company to experience the field and get a chance.
>> Instead of going to college, I would have gone to a theater company to experience working in that field.
For now If I go back to that time, I want to learn a language.
>> If I had gone back in time, I would have also studied a language.
It\'s interesting.
>> It’s because I find it interesting.
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