July 5th\'s homework

2024-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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If I haven\'t take acting, I won\'t go to the college. Because I don\'t have any plans except acting. But instead of going to college, I would have gone to a theater company to experience the field and get a chance. For now If I go back to that time, I want to learn a language. It\'s interesting.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


I would have loved to learn a new language too. I think it is really interesting. 


-Teacher Ash 


If I haven\'t take acting, I won\'t go to the college. 

>> If I haven\'t taken acting, I won\'t go to college. 


Because I don\'t have any plans except acting.

>>It’s because I don’t have any plans except for acting. 


 But instead of going to college, I would have gone to a theater company to experience the field and get a chance. 

>> Instead of going to college, I would have gone to a theater company to experience working in that field. 


For now If I go back to that time, I want to learn a language.

>> If I had gone back in time, I would have also studied a language.


 It\'s interesting.

>> It’s because I find it interesting.


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