july It's my introduction

I already wrote all of my introduction but It's said I have to write 800 letters less.....How do I know that during write essay?oh no I want to write essay without limit.....I will write my essay devide into three!! <Introduction> My name is [Name] Choi and my English name is [이름]. I'm a third grade student in Chunbo middle school. I libe in Uijeongbu with my father, mother and one older brother. I am small but very active and behave condently. My hobby is drawing pictures,I like to draw plaster statues and decorate something. I also like reaing books I especially like 'Adritr in the Pacific: Two years holiday'. In the story, I was moved by the boys who were always did their best and solved the problems in cooperation with each other. To be continued...

Baby girl!! The first part of your introduction seems interesting..can’t wait for the second part. Xoxo, Julie I already wrote all of my introduction but It's said I have to write 800 letters less..... >> I already wrote all of my introduction but It says I have to write 800 letters or less..... How do I know that during write essay? >>How will I know that while I’m writing my essay? oh no I want to write essay without limit..... >> oh no! I want to write essay without limit..... I will write my essay devide into three!! >>I will write my essay divided into three!!<Introduction>>>Correct^^My name is [Name] Choi and my English name is [이름]. >>CORRECT^^ I'm a third grade student in Chunbo middle school. >>CORRECT^^ I libe in Uijeongbu with my father, mother and one older brother. >> I live in Uijeongbu with my father, mother and my older brother. I am small but very active and behave condently. >>I may be small but I am active,well- behaved  and confident. My hobby is drawing pictures.I like to draw plaster statues and decorate something. >>One my hobby is drawing pictures. >> or I love drawing pictures. I like to draw plaster statues and decorate something. >> I like to draw plaster statues and decorate stuff. >>I like to draw plaster statues and decorating. I also like reaing books I especially like 'Adritr in the Pacific: Two years holiday'. >> I also like reading books. I especially like 'Adritr in the Pacific: Two years holiday'. >>CORRECT^^ In the story, I was moved by the boys who were always did their best and solved the problems in cooperation with each other.>> In the story, I was moved by the boys who did their best and solved their problems cooperate with each other.To be continued... >>CORRECT^^