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2016-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He was Dutch, not Danish. _____________________________________ 2. This, however is something completely different. _____________________________________ 3. Laughing joyously the two women, drove off into the sunset. _____________________________________ 4. His grandfather, a veteran of World War II died last year. _____________________________________ 5. The professor explained the theory well yet, most of the students still, didn’t understand it. _____________________________________

강사 첨삭

      Happy Monday, Mr. [이름]! ^^   How\'s your weekend? :) I hope you had a great one. Anyway, thanks for answering your homework. Study harder and keep up the good work. ^^ See you!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   1. He was Dutch, not Danish.>>Correct! 2. This, however is something completely different.>>This, however, is something completely different.3. Laughing joyously the two women, drove off into the sunset.>> Laughing joyously, the two women drove off into the sunset.4. His grandfather, a veteran of World War II died last year.>> His grandfather, a veteran of World War II, died last year.5. The professor explained the theory well yet, most of the students still, didn’t understand it. >> The professor explained the theory well, yet most of his students still didn’t understand it.    

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