jump rope teaher is late
학생이 쓴 원문
Today after english Skype class, I went to school gym to have a jumprope class before school class. I was playing with many type of ball at the gym. I was to concentrating at playing with the ball I realized that teacher is late at 8:19. So I send message to my mom and resume playing with the ball. Than at 8:40 teacher comed and we played dogeball and it was no fun because all kif in the class was bad at dogeball. I killed almost every outed person in the game, and I went back to school class I have a happy chool time.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jude! I really appreciate your time and effort in making your composition. I hope you keep it up. I am also glad that you played ball with your friends. Stay active and positive. Always be careful! - T. Lyn
Today after english Skype class, I went to school gym to have a jumprope class before school class.
>>After finishing my Skype English class today, I went to the school gym to do jump rope before my class starts.
I was playing with many type of ball at the gym.
>>I was playing with different types of balls or ball games at the gym.
I was to concentrating at playing with the ball I realized that teacher is late at 8:19.
>>As I was concentrating on playing ball, I realized that the teacher was late and arrived at 8:19 am.
So I send message to my mom and resume playing with the ball.
>>So, I sent a message to my mom and started playing ball again.
Than at 8:40 teacher comed and we played dogeball and it was no fun because all kif in the class was bad at dogeball.
>>The teacher came at 8:40 am and we played dodgeball, but it wasn\'t fun because all the kids in the class were not good at dodgeball.
I killed almost every outed person in the game, and I went back to school class I have a happy chool time.
>>After killing almost everyone in the game, I went back to school and am living a happy school life.
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