June 10, 2015

Hello James!

That\'s a great idea. Some reminders:

You need to apply parallelism in your writing. It is the balance between two or more similar words, phrases or clauses is called parallelism in grammar. Parallelism is also called parallel structure or parallel construction. Parallel construction prevents awkwardness, promotes clarity and improves writing style and readability.

examples:

My mother likes cooking and to read. incorrect
My mother likes cooking and reading . correct

Teacher Venus^^

Regarding president family\'s life, As we discussed today, it has pros and cons.

>>>Regarding the president\'s family life as we discussed today, it has pros and cons.

We could get wealth and fame, but we would be kept under guard everyday and watch out all of our behaviors.

>>>We could get wealth and fame, but we would be kept under guard everyday and be under scrutiny.

However, when somebody ask me that you want to be president family, I will say yes and feel the honorable situation.

>>>However, if somebody asks me if I want to be in the president\'s family, I will say \'yes\' and feel the honorable situation.

By the way, it is just imagination!!

>>>By the way, it is just my imagination!

Have a nice day.
>>>CORRECT