June 10th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was first met my boss, I was nervous because she\'s same age with my mother and I was unfamiliar wtih older the elderly as like she.
She looks like untalkative person. But she only talked about negative things or her favorite singer. I\'ve never seen anyone so passionate in fan activity.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing about your experience. First days always make us nervous! ^^
-Teacher Ash
When I was first met my boss, I was nervous because she\'s same age with my mother and I was unfamiliar wtih older the elderly as like she.
>> When I met my boss for the first time, I was nervous because she is the same age as my mom. I\'ve never had an older boss before too, so this is new to me.
She looks like untalkative person.
>> She looks like a quiet person.
But she only talked about negative things or her favorite singer.
>> She always complains but she also likes to talk about her favorite singer.
I\'ve never seen anyone so passionate in fan activity.
>> I\'ve never seen anyone so passionate with her favorite singer.
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