June 11, 2015
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
I agree with you. Some reminders:
The reflexive pronouns are: Singular: myself - yourself - himself - herself - itself Plural: ourselves - yourselves - themselves
Teacher Venus^^
The smart phone is making decisions on behalf of ourself
>>>The smart phone is making decisions on behalf of ourselves.
We can easily agree that smart phone occupy the great part of our life.
>>>We can easily agree that smart phones occupy the great part of our life.
We are using it everyday and anywhere.
>>>CORRECT
The number of smart phone contents is exploding and some contents express the opinions of celebrity or famous writer or journalist.
>>>The number of smart phone contents is exploding and some contents express the opinions of celebrities, famous writers or journalists.
I am worrying about the fact that teenagers just follow the opinions without their own mind.
>>>I am worrying about the fact that teenagers just follow any opinions without thinking.
They should think about something by themself.
>>>They should think about something by themselves.
That is it. Have a nice day.
>>>CORRECT
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