June 12th homework
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your experience with your teacher. It must have been so fun to be part of her class. ^^
-Teacher Ash
I met my favorite teacher when i was in second grade in college.
>> I met my favorite teacher when I was in my second year of college.
She was acting teacher.
>>She was my acting teacher.
As soon as we started our lesson, she said she lost her ring.
>> CORRECT
My friends and I tried to find that.
>> My friends and I tried to look for it.
After 15 minutes, she said it was a fake.
>> After 15 minutes, she told us that she did not actually lose it.
But she observed our finding action.
>> She just wants to observe our reaction.
Because it could look awkward when we were acting, so it was a training to bring out natural behavior.
>> It is because, it would look awkward if we knew it wasn’t true, so she thought it’s a training to evoke our genuine behavior.
It was a big blow for us.
>> It was a big surprise for us.
She was really good at teaching acting.
>> CORRECT
I felt I was growing up with that class.
>> I felt like I learned a lot in that class.
Everytime was exciting.
>> Everyday, the acting class was exciting.
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