June 15, 2015

What will be the best way to reinstate the workers who get fired unfairly? It is a difficult question although I said that it will be the best way how they express their unreasonable layoff to law makers or government. We cannot assure the powerful listens to their voice and present a solution. Hence, many protesters gather in Gwanghwamun, which is the best location for protest in Korea. It is really a sad story and what we should resolve. Good night, teacher. -James

Hello James!   This is really a tough topic but I\'m glad you still wrote about it. Some reminders:   Make sure that your sentences are clear. Clarity refers mainly to sentences, although, since sentences are made up of words, diction (word choice) is important.  Diction affects clarity because imprecise words make the meaning unclear.  The main concern is:  Does each sentence communicate the desired point, without confusion?  One key to clear sentences is effective syntax (sentence structure):  the order of and relationship between words, phrases, and clauses in a sentence.    Teacher Venus^^   What will be the best way to reinstate the workers who get fired unfairly? >>>What will be the best way to reinstate the workers who got fired unfairly?It is a difficult question although I said that it will be the best way how they express their unreasonable layoff to law makers or government. >>>It is a difficult question although I said that it will be the best way for them to express their unreasonable layoff to the law makers or the government.   We cannot assure the powerful listens to their voice and present a solution. >>>We cannot assure if the comapny is listening to their voice and thinking of a solution.   Hence, many protesters gather in Gwanghwamun, which is the best location for protest in Korea. >>>Hence, many protesters gather in Gwanghwamun, which is the best location for protests in Korea.   It is really a sad story and what we should resolve. >>>It is really a sad story and we need to think of how we should resolve the problem. Good night, teacher. >>>Good night Teacher.