June 16, 2015
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, we covered the stereotype of Asian people and agreed that there is the difference between Western and Eastern sides with respect to personal appearance. It is not good to judge person only in our way. When we accept the difference, we will be closer to each other.
Have a nice night.
-James
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
Nice Work! Some reminders:
Don\'t forget your article \'a\'.
example: It is not good to judge a person only in our way.
Teacher Venus^^
Today, we covered the stereotype of Asian people and agreed that there is the difference between Western and Eastern sides with respect to personal appearance.
>>>CORRECT
It is not good to judge person only in our way.
>>>It is not good to judge a person only in our way.
When we accept the difference, we will be closer to each other.
>>>CORRECT
Have a nice night.
>>>CORRECT
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