June 17, 2015

2015-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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What President Park should resolve before the termination of her office? I think that the way Park takes to resolve diplomatic problem between neighbor countries such as Japan and North Korea is not good. It seems like that She assure that we can get what we want when we assume a hostile attitude. It is right for Korea to receive public apology from Japan with respect to military prostitution issue which happened during Japanese colonial days and also to make North Korea stop doing nuclear experiments for Korean Peninsula's peace. But, we cannot get anything when we are stick for them as we are. We should show that we are ready to talk with you. I hope that Park is closer to the neighbor countries. Thanks. -James

강사 첨삭

Hello James!

 

It\'s great how you explained your stand. Some reminders:


1. In questions, the word order subject-verbs-object is the same as in affirmative sentences. The only thing that’s different is that you usually have to put the auxiliary verb (or the main verb “be”) before the subject. Interrogatives are put at the beginning of the sentences.

example: What should President Park resolve before the termination of her office?

 

2. \'neighboring countries\' is the acceptable phrase

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

What President Park should resolve before the termination of her office?

>>>What should President Park resolve before the termination of her office?


I think that the way Park takes to resolve diplomatic problem between neighbor countries such as Japan and North Korea is not good.

>>>I think that the way Park takes to resolve the diplomatic problem between neighboring countries such as Japan and North Korea is not good.

 

It seems like that She assure that we can get what we want when we assume a hostile attitude.

>>>It seems that she assures that we can get what we want when we assume a hostile attitude.


It is right for Korea to receive public apology from Japan with respect to military prostitution issue which happened during Japanese colonial days and also to make North Korea stop doing nuclear experiments for Korean Peninsula\'s peace.

>>>It is right for Korea to receive a public apology from Japan with respect to military prostitution issue which happened during Japanese colonial days and also to make North Korea stop doing nuclear experiments for Korean Peninsula\'s peace.

But, we cannot get anything when we are stick for them as we are. We should show that we are ready to talk with you.
>>>But, we cannot get anything when we are strict. We should show that we are ready to talk with them.


I hope that Park is closer to the neighbor countries.

>>>I hope that Park will be closer to the neighboring countries.

Thanks.
>>>CORRECT

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