June 19, 2015

Hello James!

You are doing much better today. Your common error is subject-verb agreement. I already wrote about that before so I will just remind you to be mindful of the subject-verb agreement rules.

Check this out: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sv_agr.htm

Teacher Venus^^

\"Urban Grannies\" is the prevalent trend in Korea

>>>\"CORRECT

Mother cannot give up their job for economy reasons after they bear a child and it is also difficult to vacate their seat for a year.

>>>Mothers cannot give up their job for economic reasons after they bear a child. It is also difficult for them to vacate their seat for a year.

Hence, they come back before some months.

>>>Hence, they come back after some months.

I think that this trend will generate the population problem.

>>>CORRECT

The trends means that all of the mothers cannot afford to take care of their child and it discourages them to bear second child.

>>>The trend means that all of the mothers cannot afford to take care of their child and it discourages them to bear another child.

Now, it cannot be seen as a big problem, but it can becomes bigger as time go on.
>>>Now, it cannot be seen as a big problem, but it can become bigger as time goes on.

Have a nice week.
>>>CORRECT