June 24th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How you feel about it
I\'m exciting working with other people.
Advantage
By working with other people, I can have unexpected experiences.
Working with others allows me to the power to try new things.
Through working with other people, I can improve my interpersonal skills.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing about your thoughts on this. See you later! ^^
-Teacher Ash
How you feel about it
>> How do I feel working with other people?
I\'m exciting working with other people.
>> I\'m excited to work with other people.
By working with other people, I can have unexpected experiences.
>>CORRECT
Working with others allows me to the power to try new things.
>> Working with others allows me the power to try new things.
Through working with other people, I can improve my interpersonal skills.
>> CORRECT
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