June 28th homehork
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever I watch something, I want to eat something delicious.
Some knowledgeable person has a lot of pride.
I feel rewarded when I go to swimming in the morning.
Finance issues should be handled sensitively, even if it is a family relationship.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Excellent work. Keep it up! ^^
-Teacher Ash
Whenever I watch something, I want to eat something delicious.
>>CORRECT
Some knowledgeable person has a lot of pride.
>> A knowledgeable person has a lot of pride.
I feel rewarded when I go to swimming in the morning.
>> I feel rewarded when I go swimming in the morning.
Finance issues should be handled sensitively, even if it is a family relationship.
>> Financial issues should be handled carefully, especially within the family.
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