June 29, 2015
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays, the number of air accidents arises. From Malaysia Airline to German Wings, passengers are worrying about that before their trip. I agree that it is difficult to prevent air accident, specifically because of natural disaster. However, it can be caused by man-made disaster as in German Wings. We should enforce and modify aviation act to prevent it from repeating and try to develop the aircraft which can withstand under any natural disaster.
Have a nice night.
-James
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
Now that\'s what I call a fine job! Some reminders:
If you don\'t want to use the articles \'a\' or \'an\', you can just make the singular noun plural.
example: I agree that it is difficult to prevent air accidents, specifically because of natural disasters.
Teacher Venus^^
Nowadays, the number of air accidents arises.
>>>CORRECT
From Malaysia Airline to German Wings, passengers are worrying about that before their trip.
>>>CORRECT
I agree that it is difficult to prevent air accident, specifically because of natural disaster.
>>>I agree that it is difficult to prevent air accidents, specifically because of natural disasters.
However, it can be caused by man-made disaster as in German Wings.
>>>CORRECT
We should enforce and modify aviation act to prevent it from repeating and try to develop the aircraft which can withstand under any natural disaster.
>>>We should enforce and modify aviation acts to prevent accidents from repeating and try to develop the aircraft which can withstand any natural disaster.
Have a nice night.
>>>CORRECT
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