June 2nd homework.

2017-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1. A girl or a woman who has the same mother and father as I do is my sister. 2. A boy or a man who has the same mother and father as I do is my brother. 3. My father's brother is my uncle. 4. My father's sister is my aunt. 5. The son of my father's brother is my cousin. P.S : Thank you for your kind words. Today is burning friday! I am ready to play and then go to club! Hahaha :)

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

I think that you are really ready to party tonight!

I really envy you! (Hahaha)

Anyway, you deserve it!

Enjoy and have fun!

~Teacher Chloe

1. A girl or a woman who has the same mother and father as I do is my sister.

>>Correct!
2. A boy or a man who has the same mother and father as I do is my brother.

>>Correct!
3. My father\'s brother is my uncle.
>>Correct!

4. My father\'s sister is my aunt. 

>>Correct!

5. The son of my father\'s brother is my cousin.
>>Correct!
P.S : Thank you for your kind words.

>>Correct!
Today is burning friday!

>>Your grammar is correct. However, just capitalize the letter \"F\" for the word \"Friday\". 

>>It should be like this \"Today is burning Friday\".
 I am ready to play and then go to club! Hahaha :)

>>I am ready to go to the club! Hahaha!

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