June 30, 2015
학생이 쓴 원문
The personalized product I would like to get mostly is a hand-made car. Ferrari and Lamborghini provide such a car and it will be the only one in the world because we can request to change everything depending on our taste during the process time. But, the price of the car can up to 1 million USD so that I cannot buy it now... I would like to buy it when I make sufficient money. I hope.
Good night.
-James
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
Wow! That\'s really expensive. Some reminders:
1. We usually use helping verbs with main verbs. They \"help\" the main verb (which has the real meaning).
example: I can do that. (\'can\' is a helping verb, \'do\' is the main verb)
2. \'So that\' indicates purpose. \'So\' indicates the result.
examples: But, the price of the car can be up to 1 million USD so I cannot buy it now.
Elena will groom the horse in the morning so that she can ride it in the afternoon.
Teacher Venus^^
The personalized product I would like to get mostly is a hand-made car.
>>>CORRECT
Ferrari and Lamborghini provide such a car and it will be the only one in the world because we can request to change everything depending on our taste during the process time.
>>>Ferrari and Lamborghini provide such a car and it will be the only one in the world because we can request to change everything depending on our taste during the processing.
But, the price of the car can up to 1 million USD so that I cannot buy it now...
>>>But, the price of the car can be up to 1 million USD so I cannot buy it now.
I would like to buy it when I make sufficient money.
>>>CORRECT
I hope.>>>CORRECT
Good night.>>>CORRECT
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