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학생이 쓴 원문
Tomorrow is the last day of this shift.
I am having a day off on sunday.
I don't have a specific plan for my day off
I will probably go to hospital and meet my girlfriend.
Since it is been a long time for me not to see her,
I would like to have a great meal with her.
She has been sick from fatigue since 2 days ago.
I hope she will be okay soon.
I am going to participate in final round of English competition next Tuesday.
So, I have to modify my material which I used in the preliminary round.
I am going to put some sound effects into the material.
강사 첨삭
TGIF!^^ Let's both enjoy our weekend!:) Anyway, I hope that you and your girlfriend will have fun on your date.:)
Here are your corrections:
-Teacher JM
Tomorrow is the last day of this shift.
>>>correct^^I am having a day off on sunday.
>>>correct^^I don't have a specific plan for my day off
>>>correct^^I will probably go to hospital and meet my girlfriend.
>>>I will probably go to the hospital and then meet my girlfriend.Since it is been a long time for me not to see her,
>>>This is because it has been a long time since I last saw her.I would like to have a great meal with her.
>>>correct^^She has been sick from fatigue since 2 days ago.
>>>She has been sick from fatigue for 2 days now.I hope she will be okay soon.
>>>correct^^I am going to participate in final round of English competition next Tuesday.
>>>I am going to participate in the final round of the English competition next Tuesday.So, I have to modify my material which I used in the preliminary round.
>>>correct^^I am going to put some sound effects into the material.
>>>correct^^
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