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2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Tomorrow is the last day of this shift. I am having a day off on sunday. I don't have a specific plan for my day off I will probably go to hospital and meet my girlfriend. Since it is been a long time for me not to see her, I would like to have a great meal with her. She has been sick from fatigue since 2 days ago. I hope she will be okay soon. I am going to participate in final round of English competition next Tuesday. So, I have to modify my material which I used in the preliminary round. I am going to put some sound effects into the material.

강사 첨삭

TGIF!^^ Let's both enjoy our weekend!:) Anyway, I hope that you and your girlfriend will have fun on your date.:) Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM Tomorrow is the last day of this shift. >>>correct^^I am having a day off on sunday. >>>correct^^I don't have a specific plan for my day off >>>correct^^I will probably go to hospital and meet my girlfriend. >>>I will probably go to the hospital and then meet my girlfriend.Since it is been a long time for me not to see her, >>>This is because it has been a long time since I last saw her.I would like to have a great meal with her. >>>correct^^She has been sick from fatigue since 2 days ago. >>>She has been sick from fatigue for 2 days now.I hope she will be okay soon. >>>correct^^I am going to participate in final round of English competition next Tuesday. >>>I am going to participate in the final round of the English competition next Tuesday.So, I have to modify my material which I used in the preliminary round. >>>correct^^I am going to put some sound effects into the material. >>>correct^^  

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