Just chat..
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I prepare how i talk to you before the class.
First, I think about contents what i want to talk and then I translate it.
If it isn\'t work out, I use PAPAGO(translate website)
I think important thing is watching English contents a lot.
Here is another story.
I sang a song for my best friend with my boyfriend at her wedding.
Also I got a bouquet!
Everybody think I\'m getting to marry soon. but I don\'t want to be married right now.
My age is still young... haha
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HOMEWORK
Q. Are only young people beautiful? Why? Explain in 5 sentences or more.
The beauty can separate inner beauty and external beauty.
I think inner beauty is more important in life. Because external beauty will change soon.
We can\'t stop aging.. Health is including inner beauty. So we have to exercise for anti aging, and our health.
Reading a book also helpful enhance inner beauty.
I want to be beautiful person who has warm heart and intelligent.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kate!
That was a great story.
I\'m glad you can enjoy and work hard at the same time.
Balance is the key to everything.
Please take note of the suggestions below!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Actually, I prepare how i talk to you before the class.
>> I actually prepare some sentences to tell you in class.
First, I think about contents what i want to talk and then I translate it.>> First, I think about the things that I want to say and then I translate it.
If it isn\'t work out, I use PAPAGO(translate website)
If it isn\'t work out, I use PAPAGO(translate website)
>> If I don\'t know how to do it, I use PAPAGO which is a translation website.
I think important thing is watching English contents a lot.
I think important thing is watching English contents a lot.
>> I think what is important is watching a lot of English shows and videos.
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