Just in case, send the file and answer in 2 sentences together
학생이 쓴 원문
Just in case, send the file and answer in 2 sentences together.
2. \"I am particularly interested in learning how to integrate the technical precision of ballet with the freedom and expressiveness of contemporary dance. I hope to expand my movement vocabulary, develop my choreographic skills, and gain a deeper understanding of various performance practices. I am excited to work with diverse choreographers and learn about new movement languages that challenge the boundaries of traditional dance forms. Additionally, I expect to refine my performance abilities and deepen my understanding of the creative process.\"
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Hi Young In! Could you please send me in words? This is an image so I will not be able to copy and paste your answer. I could only check number 2 answer, but not the others. Perhaps you may follow what you\'ve done for answers 1 & 2 for the other questions.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I am eager to learn how to combine the technical precision of ballet with the freedom of contemporary dance. I want to expand my movements, develop my choreographic skills, and gain a deeper understanding of different performance practices. I am excited to work with some choreographers and learn about new steps that challenge the limits of traditional dance forms. Additionally, I expect to refine my performance abilities and deepen my understanding of the creative process.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.