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They live in a very cold place. They live in a South Pole. Mabye you know South and North Pole is both very cold. It is also to pengiun. If there are so cold, first, all the penguins gathered there. After making six circles, the innermost children will be warm, but the outermost children will be cold, so the children inside go outside again and the children outside go inside and keep each other warm.
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Hi there Maria!
Yes, penguins live in cold places. In the movie Happy Feet, there are so many of them there. They are birds that cannot fly.
We will discuss more of them when we see each other tomorrow. thank you for doing your homework always.
Excellent job!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
They live in a South Pole.
>> They live in the South Pole.
Mabye you know South and North Pole is both very cold.
>> Maybe you know that the South and North Poles are both very cold.
It is also to pengiun. If there are so cold, first, all the penguins gathered there.
>> It is also for penguins. If there are cold places, first, all of the penguins are gathered there.
After making six circles, the innermost children will be warm, but the outermost children will be cold, so the children inside go outside again and the children outside go inside and keep each other warm.
>> Correct!
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