Just say

2011-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I totally Think a kind of job treating people are stressful. Because there are so many unexpected events like clients always talking about their complaints and repeatable nuisances. nowdays I remember someone's mention that the jobs are for their house rent in the movie THE DEVIL WEAR PRADA.

강사 첨삭

Hi Nicole! Thanks for sharing a short idea today. Mainly you have to be careful with your capitalizations but the rest was just okay. Take care and I hope to speak with you with the same book like mine! Haha! ^^kk -Tiny^0^-   I totally Think a kind of job treating people are stressful. >>I totally think a kind of job like treating people are stressful. Because there are so many unexpected events like clients always talking about their complaints and repeatable nuisances. >>CORRECTnowdays I remember someone's mention that the jobs are for their house rent in the movie THE DEVIL WEAR PRADA. >> Nowdays I remember someone's mentioned that the jobs are for their house rent in the movie "The Devil Wears Prada."  

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