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2011-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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i was so busy yesterday, today is friday. we cheer up. ^-^ i have to go to police station to reopen my driver's livcense. and i had laminated my front tooth a week ago. my mother's friend recommended a doctor. doctor looked at my tooth,he said. it's good, come here again after 6 months to recheck. i don't definitely know the reason but i dont want to go to dental clinic since when i was young. i felt adoubt but i can't do anything so i'm a weak, no a medical wisdom, person. i want to know some doctors, and i think among my friends i'm the smartest. i read sort of books,but i don't think about the title,but i remember a line.you're around who don't exsit reader, become you, reader.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!!  I think that you\'re really making up the most of your spare time meaningful nowadays. I envy you that you all have the time to do some important things that you need to accomplish.  I also love reading books and it riches my knowledge about a lot of things in life. So I suggest for you to continue reading and learning. Take care and talk to you on Monday [이름].   i was so busy yesterday, today is friday. >> I was so busy yesterday and today it\'s already Friday.we cheer up. ^-^>> Let\'s cheer up.i have to go to police station to reopen my driver\'s livcense. >> I have to go to the police station to renew my driver\'s license.and i had laminated my front tooth a week ago. >> I had a dental change for my front tooth a week ago.my mother\'s friend recommended a doctor.>> It was my mother\'s friend who recommended the doctor.doctor looked at my tooth,he said it\'s good, come here again after 6 months to recheck. >> The doctor checked my tooth and he said that it looks good and he told me to return to his clinic after 6 months for another check-up.i don\'t definitely know the reason but i dont want to go to dental clinic since when i was young.>> Correcti felt adoubt but i can\'t do anything so i\'m a weak, no a medical wisdom, person.>> I felt some doubts but I can\'t do anythng so I\'m helpless, I don\'t know much about dental issues.i want to know some doctors, and i think among my friends i\'m the smartest.>> I want to know some doctors and I think among my friends I\'m the smartest one.i read sort of books,but i don\'t think about the title,but i remember a line.you\'re around who don\'t exsit reader, become you, reader. >> I read sort of books but I don\'t mind about the title. I only remember a certain line \"You\'re around who don\'t exist reader, become your own reader.\"

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