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1. he is nation's top police officer. he said. i try to be extrem activity and use pistoles and to crack down gangsters. 2. as i have read before,they're more than 130 gangsters. 3. cho said. inside police will not be promoted to senior positions. have to discover dubious collusion, between polie and private business. 1. i don't have incident by this time. but in my case, police is always authority i think police force doesn't decline. 2. i don't definitely know about topic. but i'm obvious to do something. mostly people want authority , money and honor. i think if these can use, it's good methods. i could expect. 3. i agree, because many people want to be police officer. it's not easy in korea. so i believe police. they use their pistols in nation. i think they have to prepare educations for examples, weekly , monthly educations. ii guess they would make check list or other methods. they should research. it's just my thought.

Hi [이름], Thank you for your composition. Please check for the corrections. ^^ Good night! Have a great weekend.   1.he is nation\'s top police officer. he said.>>1. \"He is the nation\'s top police officer\". He said. i try to be extrem activity and use pistoles and to crack down gangsters. >>I try to do extreme activity like using pistoles and crack down gangsters.2. as i have read before,they\'re more than 130 gangsters.>>2. As I have read before, there are more than 130 gangsters.3.cho said. inside police will not be promoted to senior positions.>> 3. Cho said \"Inside police will not be promoted to senior positions. have to discover dubious collusion, between polie and private business.>>They have to discover dubious collusion between the police and private businesses.\"1.i don\'t have incident by this time.but in my case, police is always authority>>1. I don\'t have records of any incident by this time but in my case, the police are the authority. i think police force doesn\'t decline. >>I think the police force doesn\'t decline.2.i don\'t definitely know about topic. but i\'m obvious to do something. >>2. I definitely don\'t know much about the topic but Im obviously doing somethingmostly people want authority , money and honor. >>Most of the people want power, money and honor.i think if these can use, it\'s good methods. i could expect.>>I expect it to be used for the good. 3.i agree, because many people want to be police officer.>>3. I agree, because many people wants to be a police officer. it\'s not easy in korea. so i believe police.>>It\'s not easy to be a police officer in Korea, so I believe in the police. they use their pistols in nation.>>They use their pistols for the protection of the nation. i think they have to prepare educations for examples, weekly , monthly educations.>>I think they have to educate themselves regularly. ii guess they would make check list or other methods.>>I guess they should make a check list. they should research. it\'s just my thought. >>I think they should do more research.